Friday, September 21, 2012

Breaking out of boxes, or why the five paragraph essay is undermining quality writing

In Swenson et. al. we encounter several instances of criticism towards the traditional structure of essay writing--the "beloved" 5 paragraph essay.

"In an era of growing concern about student writing scores on standardized tests, we are also seeing large numbers of teachers and schools revert from more progressive pedagogies to reductionistic approaches that suggest that students need to master only a few steps to become successful writers."

I remember in high school being told by some of the not-so-engaging teachers that we should make our essays in a specific format and that if for some reason we decided to write in a more "progressive" way, they would actually deduct points.  This mostly stemmed from there lack of effort in grading and their desire to standardize their work (at least, that's my theory).

". . . formulaic conceptions of writing, instruction, and texts encourage students not to think critically . . . even as they reinforce the positivist impression that Truth can be known and communicated if writers only train . . . in a clear, linear, and orderly fashion."

Again, I remember instance where I felt limited by the supposedly "correct" structure of how writing "should" be.  Even at the college level I struggled with this. In Intro. to Ed. we were forced under strict guidelines of APA formatting.  My writing was unimaginative and robotic at times.  Even in College Writing II, I felt that my creativity and skills were being held back by the need to fit what "proper" writing is supposed to look like.

I propose that we, as future teachers, teach the traditional ways but also encourage other means of expression. We need to keep the past traditions in mind while incorporating new possibilities for the kids to try.  As long as they effectively convey their point, I think they should be encouraged to do so in a variety of ways.

2 comments:

  1. Jake, I think it's interesting that you bring up their "lack of effort in grading." I think this is one of the largest concerns in assigning non-traditional writing assignments. I understand (believe me) how much time it takes to design a writing assignment and rubric...and then to grade x amount of students' papers. But I hope that here at SRU you are being exposed to a variety of ways you can design various writing assignments and assess them. While it takes time to grade, it also takes time to design rubrics. But that is no excuse for the teachers to only assign 5 paragraph essays.

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  2. I really agree with everything you said. I knew a lot of teachers in grade/high school that focused so heavily on the 5 paragraph essay that they actually missed out and ignored a lot of students creativity simply because it didn't fit in the teacher's standard's of writing.

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